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Teen Poetry #9

This Love Isn't Real..?

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2009-04-06 06:17 PM

Walking down this busy hallway
all I see is your eyes in mine.
Smoldering love is whats brewing,
an interlock of hands brings me to you.

"I want to know you more..."
is all you needed to say to start us.
How could I be so lucky
to have you in my life?

Feet shuffling along the floor,
as I skip to your side.
Slowly but surely this dance begins,
and all I see is the love in your eyes.

Here we are now,
dancing in the deadbeat mall,
under the light of the bright flourescents,
a twitch of our lips brings us together.

"So are you two official yet?"
is such an understatement to how we are.
The way your arm wraps around my waist,
whenever I shiver from the cold...

The way you always know whats wrong
before you even hear my voice.
It's all so wonderful,
how can it be real?

The fact is its not...
just another knock on the door
and this dream of love ends,
while I wait for another one to begin.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-04-06 06:21 PM

I really enjoyed this Julianna. We all dream of love, but if you keep dreaming it will come true.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-04-06 06:49 PM

Ahh! love this!!! Library for sure!!

lol
-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2009-04-07 02:26 AM

Love this Julianna. It's amazing.. and so true.. but as ppl keep telling me.. It's better to have loved and lost... than never to have loved at all!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2009-04-07 12:45 PM

thanks so much luke, zach, and jess

i'm glad you liked it...

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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