Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2009-03-26
08:51 PM
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This is my attempt to free myself from a writers block...I hope you like this, because its all I have in me, lol...so yeah. ___________________________________________________ Darkness... the unending silence among us while we wait for the sunlight that lights up the day. I'm in a maze where I'm trapped, never being able to grasp the rope right above me, so that I can climb out. Darkness... a feeling of self-regret when nothing else matters. Or does it? I'm stuck in this hole and as I scream for someone--anyone, there's no reply. How will I go on? Darkness... a tug-of-war every day on the feelings that fight to overcome my sane self. I'm surrounded by people who know nothing about me... and do little to notice how hurting I am. Light... the beam that brightens my day in the darkest of tunnels, while all those past struggles pull on me. I'm finally free from everything I've done. I'm with my old friends, and the family that loves me. Here I can breathe the air and fill up my lungs. I can jump for joy, and scream in excitement. Thank you for helping me, I owe it all to you... I love you so much, but I miss you too... ?ul!@nn@
these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
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2009-03-26
08:56 PM
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"I'm surrounded by people who know nothing about me... and do little to notice how hurting I am."
I understand this
and what a great picture!
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Falling rain
Member Elite
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
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2009-03-26
09:52 PM
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Both the poem and picture are beautiful!! Love this!!
-ZachWhen I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.
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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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Posts 422
Canada
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2009-03-26
11:15 PM
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thanks SEA and zach i'm glad someone responded to this, lol...?ul!@nn@
these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again
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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
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2009-03-27
05:54 PM
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This is very nice, both the poem and pic!"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick
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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
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2009-03-28
10:43 PM
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I really enjoyed this Julianna.In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!
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