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Everybody Needs Somebody
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Everybody Needs Somebody |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
This is really, really bad, but it wasn't written to be good. It was just a way of venting so keep that in mind when reading. Everybody Needs Somebody I’m so sick and I’m so tired My smile has finally expired Been trodden on so many times Now I have to draw the line I can’t take this, it’s all too much I’m all alone and out of touch Worthless, useless, you just don’t see I’m in so much pain I’m no longer me My back is breaking under pain Rotting, lonely, filled with disdain No energy left to try and fight For my life nor for my right I need someone to hold me down To not stand by and watch me drown Just tell me that it’ll be okay That it’ll be alright at end of day I’m so filled with hate, just who am I? Keep falling down, I don’t know why But it’s too late for me to forgive I’m just too tired, I don’t want to live. [This message has been edited by Octave (03-27-2009 12:33 PM).] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Mannn this is sooooo good.. i know this feeling oh so well... infact if it wasn't for my daughter i think i would have ended my life by now... she means more to me than anything or anyone in this world... Hold on. cause one day you'll get a perfect lil saviour like i did.. "I'm drowning here in my own cries To think that i believed your lies Your tore me down and broke my heart I wish you'd killed me from the start" |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
This is good for a vent, and I can relate. "I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick |
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