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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2009-03-24 09:04 PM



Eh... yeah this poem sux


Wild and thinking random letters
Overfill the empty spaces,
Idiotic needs crave, as senseless
Beings will do, loving only
Love in its self; switching lights off
To forget its solid truth, and
Others in their lucid notions.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2009-04-20 08:43 AM


Ummm, not saying a word on the poem...

I do believe that many people are more in love with the aspect of being in love than with any person...Including me. Lol...

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