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Teen Poetry #9
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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2009-03-20 03:44 AM


So live and stop the whining now
So fly and start your dreaming soon
So cry but wipe your tears away
And love beneath another moon
© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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1 posted 2009-03-20 08:23 AM

Hmmmm, I don't exactly believe in dreaming except during sleep. It's pointless to me.

GothicCherry
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2 posted 2009-03-20 08:25 AM

Maybe you could come up with a better word than 'cry' It annoys me. Maybe weep or something of the sort.
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