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Teen Poetry #9

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illuminated truth
Junior Member

since 2009-02-16

Posts 20

0 posted 2009-03-18 10:19 PM

The world is filled with so much hate
Hate used for hidden fears
Fears of being different,
Fears that are used to mask the insecure
Insecurity starts from within
Within the heart, & inside the mind
But the real beauty of a person is inside..
Inside the soul.
Seek yourself & you shell find
Find beauty in imperfection
Real beauty beyond a mirror reflection

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

1 posted 2009-03-20 08:32 AM

I'm sorry, but I REALLY liked this and I just had to clean it up a little bit so that I could read it easily.

The idea is very good I thought.

The world consists of much hate.
That hate is used for hidden fears
The fears of being different,
fears used to mask the insecure.
Insecurity starts from within,
within the heart, and inside the mind.
Yet the real beauty of a person is inside,
inside the soul.
Seek yourself and you shall find,
find beauty in imperfection
Real beauty beyond that of reflection.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-03-22 08:30 PM

I really like the message!!

And don't mind Michaela, she's been doing that a lot.

I have to be honest, I like the way you wrote it, and not so much how she changed it a bit.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2009-03-22 09:18 PM

Yea don't mind me at all. I just get sooo bored and start changing things to how would have done them.

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