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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2008-12-30 12:03 PM


It's true-
I was afraid
But with a few simple words
You give me the strength
To let go of my fearful chains

I am secure now
And ashamed
I could not feel so before
Three words, holding so much power,
Thee words I could never honestly speak
Have become truth

It's almost odd
But it's the most beautiful sort of strange,
I have no other wish
No other desire,
Than to be with you
For as long as I possibly can

I dont feel like me
When you're gone
I need to see you again
To be completely myself

I promised you I loved you
I promise you I love you
I promise you I will always love you.

© Copyright 2008 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
Posts 117

1 posted 2008-12-31 08:20 PM


very nice
GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2009-01-27 09:30 PM


I love this poem! Very beautiful...

The last stanza is my favorite. The past, present, future tenses aren't normally so pronounced in many poems I have read.

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