Teen Poetry #9 |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
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It's true- I was afraid But with a few simple words You give me the strength To let go of my fearful chains I am secure now And ashamed I could not feel so before Three words, holding so much power, Thee words I could never honestly speak Have become truth It's almost odd But it's the most beautiful sort of strange, I have no other wish No other desire, Than to be with you For as long as I possibly can I dont feel like me When you're gone I need to see you again To be completely myself I promised you I loved you I promise you I love you I promise you I will always love you. |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
very nice |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I love this poem! Very beautiful... The last stanza is my favorite. The past, present, future tenses aren't normally so pronounced in many poems I have read. |
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