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Teen Poetry #9

Someday

JennJenn
Junior Member

since 2009-02-18

Posts 20
Canada

0 posted 2009-03-16 10:38 AM

I miss your smile,
Your beautiful face
I miss the feeling
Of your warm embrace

I miss your voice
And your whole-hearted smile
I loved your laughter
We hadn’t heard in a while

I love the way you fought
And I looked up to you
But you can rest with God now
For your fight is finally through

And I will always love you
I’ll never forget that day
But one thing I’ll always remember:
I’ll be seeing you someday.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-03-16 10:49 AM

Hey Jenn,

This reminds me of my special friend, Cade. I miss him every day. I miss his smile and his laughter and our conversations. I miss how he loved me and was my friend.

I like this poem. Thank you for bringing a special person to my thoughts this morning.

A

JennJenn
Junior Member

since 2009-02-18

Posts 20
Canada

2 posted 2009-03-16 02:03 PM

Thanks Alison

It's about my baba, she died a few months ago. We lived together so yeah...

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2009-03-17 10:26 PM

I loved the 1st stanza! (and the rest of it, too.)

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

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