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Teen Poetry #9

Somewhere In Nowhere

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2009-03-13 06:03 PM

Somewhere In Nowhere

I’m somewhere in-between
Point A and point B
Beginning and infinity
Ecstasy and insanity

Standing on wrong and right
I don’t bark I just bite
Winking slyly before my sight
If for love but also spite

Spin me through your tears
I’m eating up the years
Farewell to my fears
My motive quite unclear

Don’t let me have my say
I fear I may have to pay
For the words I do obey
That keep me from my way

I’m sitting in the absence
Of a misunderstood sense
Dancing with a sixpence
Of a verbal incontinence

I’m somewhere in between
Point A and point B
Just waiting for you to see
That this isn’t really me.

Different from my usual rhyme scheme. I was experimenting. sorry about mudddledness, wonky rymthm and the like.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2009-03-13 07:51 PM

I think it was alright, but definitely not your best.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-03-15 05:40 PM

Well, I loved it!! I enjoyed it like a whole lot lol

sweet_darling
New Member

since 2009-06-11

Posts 2
canada

3 posted 2009-06-11 10:53 PM

i love this poem! i can definatly relate!

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

4 posted 2009-06-12 12:56 PM

I love this poem

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

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