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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
O Daddy, I hate you from the bottom of my soul. O Daddy, I loathe you, no need to control. (Daddy, Daddy, where did you go? Deep in the ground where you heart's been lying alone?) O Daddy, I remember when you were drunk, when you wanted nothing but my life. O Daddy, shut the h*** up, I'm sick of hearing these f****** lies. (Daddy, Daddy, what happened to you? Did you finally forget yourself when you married your so-called wife?) O Daddy, I'm through with you, don't treat me like your slave. O Daddy, I'm finally walking away, it's your love I no longer crave. my knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight ----- kiss me one last time [shut your eyes] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Tori.... This is amazing.. and so true.. You don't need a dad who treats you wrong.. Excelent write sweetie.. xx |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Tori, This is perfect as always. I love it. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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angel1326 New Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 4WV, United States |
This is a great poem... hope to see more like this....<3 Sick of crying, tired of trying, yeah im smiling but inside im dying... |
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