Teen Poetry #9 |
Feelings Unrequited |
prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
As ready as I am for you, as much As i really care, your feelings change for me everyday I realize you will never really be there You spoke the words I love you and told me this felt right Then said goodbye in the mdst of the twilight. I still dont understand the way your mind changes and I probably never will. This pain it hurts and yes it's real the way I feel it wont change I love you your just not ready to love me too |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Enjoyed... |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
There are places where you are missing some punctuation, but I really liked reading this. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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