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prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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0 posted 2009-03-10 02:25 PM



As ready as I am for you, as much As i really care,
your feelings change for me everyday I realize you will never really be there
You spoke the words I love you and told me this felt right
Then said goodbye in the mdst of the twilight.
I still dont understand the way your mind changes and I probably never will.
This pain it hurts and yes it's real the way I feel
it wont change I love you
your just not ready to love me too

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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1 posted 2009-03-10 02:33 PM


Enjoyed...
freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
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2 posted 2009-03-10 02:38 PM


There are places where you are missing some punctuation, but I really liked reading this.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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