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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
Been broken with out sound The girl I lost that night She has a heart I can’t find Where is she hiding from me? How many nights’ must I lay awake? I don’t want to waste my life When can I stop looking for this beautiful girl? I won’t find her again The heart I want won’t be found Is she testing to see if I understood? The directions she gave me Are they a map to show me where she’s at? Or are they leading me back to where she stood I feel like I can’t find her I wonder if she’s figured it out I won’t ever stop Where is she? Allyson I can’t hold back any longer No matter how far away you are I won’t ever give up or rest The path I’ve built is going to keep on going Till I run into your road The road that has everything i want the road that has a place to rest |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I think this is pretty is a broken way. I like how it doesn't have much end rhyme. I'm not that big of a rhyming fan. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Well I'm the opposite of Michaela here, I love end rhyme, and don't like free verse so much, but I thought this was nice. I totally understood what you were saying in this poem. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Christine, it is truly amazing how we can be opposites yet still be so much alike. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
It's a shocker, ain't It? With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Yupps sure is..but let's quit taking over this thread lol |
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