does he love me like he says he does?

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Teen Poetry #9

does he love me like he says he does?

pandabear
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since 2009-03-08

Posts 36

0 posted 2009-03-09 09:45 PM

My dad tells me he loves me
But, then he walks away and wispers I hates you
What does this mean?
Why do you hate me so much?
Is it because I live my life my way not yours?
Do you or don't you?
Love me?
Or...
Sad to say even hate me???
I want to know do you or don't you?
Why is it so hard to say I love you?
It makes me cry to not know if you love me
Or
Even hate me
And why is it that you compair me to others?
Is it because their smarter or even better then me?
These are just questions that can't be answerd
I can live without knowing the answear
But, can you?
When you figure it out let me know

pandabear
Junior Member

since 2009-03-08

Posts 36

1 posted 2009-03-09 09:46 PM

this is so not true because my dad loves me

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-03-10 10:00 AM

Well, whether it's true for you or not, it is, sadly enough, very true for others. I liked this. I am wondering where your ideea for this came from if it is not about you.

pandabear
Junior Member

since 2009-03-08

Posts 36

3 posted 2009-03-10 12:22 PM

i can only write sad poems cuz its hard for me to write happy poems cuz all i think about many is things that are depressing so yea

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

4 posted 2009-03-20 08:38 AM

Completely understandable. I think most people now-a-days do that.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2009-03-20 01:10 PM

I can only write sad poems too. Its not that I'm some disturbing child its just I can understand sorrow way better then happiness. But then again, what is there to understand? Anywho.. I really like this! While reading this I kept thinking about picking off flower peddles saying "She does, She doesn't, She does, etc."

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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