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Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-03-03 10:36 AM

These days seem to keep getting harder
Just another burden upon my shoulder
I keep pushing to make it through
But my heart keeps getting colder

Every night I sit in crystal tears
Its been so long that I've heard your voice
I loved you so but I left you for a reason
I know I made the right choice

But this truth is getting harder to believe
That I've been chasing you for too long
Just for you to pick me up and let me down
Trapped in some sad love song

My friends think I'm over it by now
By I'm still moving on..
And I'm still walking down the same road
I'm just not that strong

I tell myself that it was for the best
But second thoughts tell me otherwise
That I should go after you again
Despite all your lies

Maybe I can fix this
before its comes too late
I promise to do better
Just stay and wait..

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2009-03-03 03:18 PM

"Every night I sit in crystal tears
Its been so long that I've heard your voice
I loved you so but I left you for a reason
I know I made the right choice"

Omg, I can so relate to this stanza, Nice poem!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-03-03 09:59 PM

My friends think I'm over it by now
By I'm still moving on..
And I'm still walking down the same road
I'm just not that strong
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Great write,

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Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2009-03-03 10:31 PM

But this truth is getting harder to believe
That I've been chasing you for too long
Just for you to pick me up and let me down
Trapped in some sad love song

Wow zach, that was absolutly amazing. that stanza just stood out like crazy, you did a wonderful job with this one, i loved it to bits and bits.
library.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

Reborn_Phoenix
Junior Member

since 2009-03-04

Posts 11

4 posted 2009-03-04 01:07 AM

I can feel the sadness in the words you write, which shows me how great a writer you are, for only the best writers can connect to the reader in such away.

Great write.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

5 posted 2009-03-06 08:55 AM

I really like the trapped in some sad love song bit.

stacylynn418
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 40
new york

6 posted 2009-03-07 09:36 PM

i really like this poem a lot.
you make the emotion so clear and it has a lot of feeling in it.
well written

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