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My Addiction
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My Addiction |
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Jostrei New Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 9Kentucky |
My Addiction My Addiction, Is The Look in your eye, My Addiction, Is The Heat Between us... I'm Addicted, To the Distraction you bring, The Way Life Doesn't matter, The Way The World Comes to a stop... My Addiction, Is the Passion In Your Soul, My Addiction, Is The Feelings You Bring, Just From Entering The Room... I'm Addicted, To Just The Little Things You Do, I'm Addicted, To Everything about You... I'm Addicted To Loving You, I'm Addicted To The Little Things, From The Smiles and Way You Say My Name, To The way You Kiss... I Cant Stop My Addiction, Or I'll Fall Apart, My Little Distraction, My way to Escape, A Higher Level Of Living, Just a Few of the Things you are... To An Addict Like Me. I'm Addicted, To The Way Your Eyes Sparkle, When Your Lost In the Moment, I'm Addicted, To The Way Your Lips Move, When Your Over Me... Your My Own Personal Addiction, A Habit That Slowly Consumes Me, Your My Favorite Way, To Spend My Morning, Day, And Night... I'm Addicted, To My Distraction, I'm Addicted, To Your Soul, Your Heart, I'm Addicted, To Everything about you, Addicted... To Loving You... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this made me grin  I can soooo relate! very nice poem |
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Jostrei New Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 9Kentucky |
Thanks Its complete Free-verse So There's No Real Pattern. I Hope everything flows Together okay. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's awesome. Sometimes it flows best in free thought  |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Yay!! I'm not the only romantic teen with lustful gestures lol welcome to PIP |
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Jostrei New Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 9Kentucky |
Thanks Cherry, I'll be posting More today but I gotta get to school for now lol. Any Grammar Issues or Ideas on how to make my poems better are desired. Please and Thank You |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Well, I would quit capitalizing words in the middle of the sentence and try to go by some sort of pattern so that it will flow better. I found the flow a bit hard to follow. |
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Jostrei New Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 9Kentucky |
The letters are a habit when typing I don't mean to it kind of just happens. I'll watch that from now on. I don't know much about form, I usually just free verse and write what seems to fit. Guess I've got some studying to do lol |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
We all have studying to do if we wish to get better. |
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