Teen Poetry #9 |
Tell Me I'm Wrong |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I was searching through my folder and I found this. I don't know if I wrote it or someone else did and I saved it for some reason. --------------------------------------------------- Something deep inside tells me to get grip. That boy ain't worth any of your time You know that's truth falling form your lips But in that same place I feel a yearning A distant feeling oh so strong. My heart is aching from it all. Its been hurting for oh too long. Why is it that good guys finished last? And that fairy tales are somehow wrong. That no body really has happy endings And truth is only found in sad love songs. This world seems messed up. Strange how it comes out that way. Please tell me that I'm wrong for I have a fear in what I say. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
i love the last stanza and when you (or the personwho wrote it ) said there is more truth in sad love songs. great job! |
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kiwie15:D Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 13california |
i am all new to this but personally i love the last stanza as well as nina. for who ever wrote it was a really good poem |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
I LOVED IT!!!! Just wow, it spoke of so much truth and honesty, absolutley great!!! |
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