Teen Poetry #9 |
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As the Clock Strikes Twelve |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland ![]() |
As the Clock Strikes Twelve A life was saved tonight, You stopped a bullet in thin air. I've never seen a closer call, than that one right there. I was almost out of reason, to keep on living life. I think that without you, I would have died tonight. So I'm thanking you Suncleaver, To me you're called a hero. I'll remember the promise I made you; I will be here tomorrow. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hey good news! ![]() |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I knew you'd come through Emily. Don't forget your own strength too, all I did was show you how to find it. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Emily, please check your email ![]() |
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Luke you just saving everyone's life lately huh? Keep it up mate. ![]() Great poem Em's -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
You'll never be left out in the cold little poet. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
And my real name's Luke. You'll have to excuse me for replying in two posts, I've just got back from the pub. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I really like the first two lines of this. |
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