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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2009-02-21 12:02 PM


As the Clock Strikes Twelve


A life was saved tonight,
You stopped a bullet in thin air.
I've never seen a closer call,
than that one right there.
I was almost out of reason,
to keep on living life.
I think that without you,
I would have died tonight.

So I'm thanking you Suncleaver,
To me you're called a hero.
I'll remember the promise I made you;
I will be here tomorrow.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}


© Copyright 2009 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-02-21 01:08 AM


hey good news! glad to hear you are ok


Suncleaver
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2 posted 2009-02-21 08:18 AM


I knew you'd come through Emily. Don't forget your own strength too, all I did was show you how to find it.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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3 posted 2009-02-21 09:42 AM


Emily,

please check your email

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4 posted 2009-02-21 10:45 AM


Luke you just saving everyone's life lately huh? Keep it up mate.
Great poem Em's

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Suncleaver
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5 posted 2009-02-21 07:41 PM


You'll never be left out in the cold little poet.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Suncleaver
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6 posted 2009-02-21 07:43 PM


And my real name's Luke. You'll have to excuse me for replying in two posts, I've just got back from the pub.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

GothicCherry
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7 posted 2009-03-06 09:03 AM


I really like the first two lines of this.
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