Darkened Daylight (just a random title)

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Teen Poetry #9

Darkened Daylight (just a random title)

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-02-19 05:52 PM

I'd like to go anywhere,
far away from here.
Pack up and leave behind all my fear.
Forget all this pain,
let everything free,
Start all over,
find a new me.

I'd love to see you smile,
just forget all they said.
It would make me so happy to get these problems out of my head.
Oh what I would do,
to see one truly happy person.
Oh the things I would do,
to find something worth living for.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-02-19 05:58 PM

A stark beauty within this poem Emilee.

Nice work.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-02-19 06:18 PM

Awwwwww... Nice poem...

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2009-02-20 05:29 PM

Loved It Emmi.. You a ledgend...

xxx <3

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

4 posted 2009-03-06 09:04 AM

I think everyone would like to see a truly happy person.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

5 posted 2009-03-06 09:05 AM

I liked your 'random title' btw

stacylynn418
Junior Member

since 2009-03-06

Posts 40
new york

6 posted 2009-03-06 03:36 PM

This is really good, and I relate to it a lot, which I'm sure a lot of people can. It flows really nicely too :]

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