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Will You Still Love Me?
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Will You Still Love Me? |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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My life was just okay Before you came along Then it was like... Wow...So this is what it's like to be alive For what seems like a few moments -a few precious moments- I mattered But it was a secret I wasn't allowed to see you Or anyone else for that matter But we tried And that tiny detail meant more to me Than...almost all the hugs in the world You said maybe later... When it's allowed... When I turn 16... Three months and thirteen days But I can't help but wonder Will you still love me by then? Do you love me now? |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
If this actually happened(s), I hope that things work out well for you! Liked ur poem, reminded me of my style (but less shakey). Not really much to say... Except good job and good luck! There is power in the pen. |
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pandabear Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36 |
I hope it all works out for u and it is really good and how u wrote it and that this is true for alot of people and it is also true for me i like how u put in ur emoton into it |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
"And that tiny detail meant more to me Than...almost all the hugs in the world" This is sooo something that I would say. I know the feelings of this well, but not the exact situation. && I'm sorry but I have to add this: Good Write! Lol... |
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