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Unclear Evidence
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Unclear Evidence |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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i saw the note sitting by the sink all folded up in smudged black ink were you crying out your heart or is this evidence unclear this cities growing dark tonight its a blackout, so turn the lights out just another long night alone i wish you were here with me |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Loved tha imagery |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Enjoyed this a lot! With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
You have hit a good writing spell!! I really like this dude. Is this a song? -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Hmmm, is it a song? I thought the same thing when I first read it. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I Loved It.. I Always Do.. Your A Ledgend... |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
yes it is a song. and ive got about twelve or so ready to put down on a album.... who wants a josalintower cd soon? lol ~ you cant run from yourself ~ |
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