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SleepBug11
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since 2013-03-18
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Sleeping

0 posted 2013-03-18 03:07 PM



I watched you walk away
a tear creeping down my cheek
Look for you, I must, I may
For it is you i must seek

Then you died, a knife in your heart
My life means no more
It seeks you in the dark
It is gone, you are gone

I am lost in the death of our love
Now I am bathed in darkness
Now I mean nothing
Because you were somthing


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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2013-04-30 01:26 AM


Welcome to the club!  Glad to see it's not -quite- dead here yet.  Hopefully we can bring it back to life!  I had a lot of fun here...  Anyway, back to the poetry.  

This is a very powerful piece!  I'm sorry that you have to go through this (if it's more then allegorical).  Just know that whatever happens in your life, no matter what you lose, your life still has meaning.  If anything it's our pain, as well as our joy, which define us.

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