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Vulpine
Junior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota

0 posted 2012-07-10 03:17 PM


Out casted, betrayed
Thought friends where supposed to be there
Wrong, dead wrong
New school
No friends
New Problem
It seems to never end
Laughed at, talked about
No one even knows me
They stare, all of them stare
Disapproving looks
Tried to get help
Didn’t work
Locked in my head
New problem
Once again

I just want you to believe in me when no one else does.

© Copyright 2012 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2012-07-17 08:47 PM


I too felt like this in highschool, but you can't dwell on how others make you feel, the only person that can make you feel bad about yourself is you! You have a talent in your writing, and I encourage you to continue! Regardless of what anyone says about you, you are different and unique! There is no need to be like anyone else or try to fit in, because the ones that are different usually have so much more to offer! I truely love this poem and I wish you the best!

Kate

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