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maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-10-25 11:15 PM

give me some feedback ok and thanks

Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here
Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here.-
I feel jubilant
It feels like I have a purpose
I feel special
Just because I have you
But somehow yet my heart
Feels empty.-
Even though you are here
I can’t see you
Even though you are here
I barely talk to you
Even though you are here
I still feel alone
Even though you are here
I can’t reach out to you
Even though you are here
I still want to be with you.-
But how!?
When I haven’t seen you
When all you are is a memory to me!?
But yet I still feel your presence.
Your presence is what makes me feel
Happy
And makes me want to go on
I don’t know what I would do without you.-
Aitai
I want to see you
Aitai
I want to see you.-
Even though you are here
Even though I can’t see you
But yet the desire of wanting
To see you
Is getting piled up
Inside my heart
Just like the flood
My tears are about to
Overflow because the pain
Is starting to grow inside my
Heart.-
I’m crying
I’m crying
I want you
I miss you
I’m vexed
I’m distressed
It hurts
Its painful
I hate this feeling!
I don’t want this feeling!
But yet it makes exultant-
Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here
Kimi ga iru kara
Because you are here
Always by my side
Supporting me in the
Shadows
Even though you are here
But very far away
I look up at the sky
Feeling the wind
Wrapping around my
Body
Sending me a sign that
You are here

BY ME

mona88
New Member

since 2011-11-24

Posts 4

1 posted 2011-11-24 09:57 PM

Really great poem. You've got the talent!
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translate English to Chinese

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2011-11-24 11:27 PM

thanks if u wantt to see more u should go to dark poetry

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2012-03-11 01:09 AM

Not bad at all!! appreciated!!!

Kate_Mcfee (Lily's Mom)

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2012-03-11 03:12 PM

thanks

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

5 posted 2012-06-08 02:49 AM

gud 1!!

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

6 posted 2012-06-08 03:24 PM

u should check out some in dark poetry

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