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nates2rad
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0 posted 2009-02-08 10:32 PM



Down to my left stands my shadow.
A symbol in itself,
Of both things I have done,
And failed to do.

It will always look back at me,
Telling me what I did wrong.
Never what I did right.
A constant reminder.

I could've, should've, would've,
It doesn't matter now.
But I will always see my faults,
And never my good qualities.

My shadow will always be there,
I know that for sure.
I also know there will be those who stand with me,
To help me get through it all.

© Copyright 2009 Nathan T. Sisson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-02-09 01:01 PM


This is good. I know the feeling of low self esteem. Its a struggle some of us have to go through. Hope things get better.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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