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madelyn
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Purgatory

0 posted 2011-05-18 07:45 PM



When the sun rose
I saw you walking over the horizon
When the sun rose
You came to me and I held you to me chest
When the sun rose
You told me it was best
To leave
When the sun rose
You were happy, young
And healthy
When the sun rose
I joined you on your journey
To the point of no return
When the sun rose

When the sun set
I noticed you were fading
When the sun set
I knew I had no time left
When the sun set
You fell to the floor
When the sun set
You couldn’t move at all
When the sun set
You told me to go on
When the sun set
I told you you’d be alright
I told you you’d survive the night
When the sun set

When the night came
You lay by the fire
When the night came
You started to fade more and more
When the night came
You told me to be strong
You told me it wouldn’t be long
When the night came
You finally faded away
When the night came

When the sun rose
When the sun set
When the night came
Twenty four hours can take a life
Ruin a life
Bring a life
When the night came
When the sun set
When the sun rose

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

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