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Teen Poetry #9

Where are you?

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

0 posted 2011-03-28 03:41 AM

Where are you when I need you?
Where are you when I need someone to cry on?
Where are you when I need someone to understand?
Where were you when my heart shattered?
Where were you when the emptiness returned?
Was it really you who taught me to love?
Was it really you who taught me to cry?
Was it really you who said I could always count on you?
Where were you when I finally fell, cracked open like an egg?
Why did you ever teach me?
What did you see in me?
I am nothing.
I am nobody.
I am dead.

HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member

since 2011-04-05

Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom

1 posted 2011-04-05 03:00 PM

Interesting

Very emotive,but what was the message you were trying to put across.
Of course the reader is engaged because we are able to perhaps think about the questions asked but what are the reasonings behind it.

And the ending, I suppose is superb.. if a little worrying!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

2 posted 2011-09-08 01:47 AM

Loved it

M

My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

LilMissHickey
Junior Member

since 2011-09-09

Posts 12
Usa

3 posted 2011-09-09 11:09 PM

This is exactly how ive been ffeeling the last couple days. Hope you find some answers.

LilMissHickey<3

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