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Teen Poetry #9

I'm Fine

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2011-02-14 07:35 PM

My dog is dead but I'm Fine
My father's gone but I'm Fine
My best friend's turned her back but I'm Fine
My heart is cold and dead but I'm Fine
My stress is slowly killing me but I'm Fine
My shoulders hurt from all the weight but I'm Fine
My eyes are screaming for help but I'm Fine
My grades are dropping lower and lower but I'm Fine
My mind can't see right from wrong but I'm Fine
My paranoia is getting worse but I'm Fine
My body and mind is failing me but I'm Fine
I'm dying on the inside but on the outside I'm Fine
I'm never okay but I'm Fine
See I'm completly Fine.

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice

KatVern17
Junior Member

since 2009-05-07

Posts 33

1 posted 2011-02-17 10:32 AM

I love this one. Its shows though everything you lost or that wasn't good you still told us you were fine even though truth be told you're not. Good work!

SarahJoyScott
Junior Member

since 2011-01-13

Posts 16
Finland

2 posted 2011-02-17 12:17 PM

You should have named this: "My Masquerade"
Nice poem.

HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member

since 2011-04-05

Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom

3 posted 2011-04-05 03:09 PM

Gosh I know how you feel!

I was living that poem a couple of months ago, it sounds like you just need a hug.

So please have one over the internet!

Much love, beautiful writer! x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

LilMissHickey
Junior Member

since 2011-09-09

Posts 12
Usa

4 posted 2011-09-09 11:21 PM

Thats beautiful! It sound so much like a lot of teens now a days! Thank you for sharring!

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