Teen Poetry #9 |
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Love and Sin |
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Joshkt Junior Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 12 |
Come with me into the night Straight towards this eternal light Travel down the road of love and sin I'm never going to win if I keep having this Feeling where I cant do it Keep this burning candle of hope lit Maybe I thought I could out wit you when you were the one who gave me my strength You tore me down from my pedastol buried me in the ground and forgot That I ever was there Now where do I belong Traveling down the empty road of lost dreams The only thing keeping me here is the feeling that maybe your near when I know that you'll never be here ~~ Everyone Deserves a Chance ~~ |
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HolsJoscelyne Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23Colchester, United Kingdom |
Wow.. That is exactly how I'm thinking at the moment. It's lovely, though sad there's so much passion and a rawness about it. I'd be honoured if you took a look at my work? But wow and well done good luck with your writing! Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com |
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