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Teen Poetry #9
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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
0 posted 2011-01-31 03:33 PM

Waiting
Waiting
Waiting
Forever waiting
For you to take action
Waiting
For your call
Waiting
For a visit
Waiting
For a birthday card
Waiting
For a Christmas present
Waiting
For your attention
Waiting
For your love

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice
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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-02-01 01:40 AM

This is great in a half dozen ways.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"
*tori_rose*
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since 2010-10-12
Posts 44
Weber City, VA
2 posted 2011-02-05 10:09 PM

i love the fact it does have a name within it so that the person reading it can conect with someone that they are waitin on

~*tori*~
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