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Starcitta
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since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA

0 posted 2011-01-23 11:19 PM



I wrote this in summer school this year. It was one of those assignments where the teacher writes random words up on the board, and you have to interpret those words into a paragraph that describes you...Only, I took a different look on it and wrote it in verse
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July 2010


I feel annoyed probably 85% of the time
A feeling of a life that's not really mine.
Millions of ways to describe it
Depression, Anxiety,
Slipping away from reality.
Embarrassed, Lonely,
But I know that I'm not the only.
I also know that no matter what
Pep-talk I recieve,
I still won't believe
Face it.
I'm out of place in this world.

Amor Y Lagrimas

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-28 01:47 AM


Like and love it. Beautiful writing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Starcitta
Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA
2 posted 2011-01-30 02:32 AM


Gracias. Its one of the first i've ever put on paper ever, so i appreciate that very much

Amor Y Lagrimas

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