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Dream Wit' Me: 's Prayer
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Dream Wit' Me: 's Prayer |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
This is a poem, and prayer that i have in my heart. I wrote it for my ex...and i dedicate it to him. It was written when we were still together, and he loved it...I hope ya'll do too. July 2010 Sittin' in this dimly lit room Prayin for your safety, Hoping danger won't loom. Wishing... To hear your soothing voice Will you make the right choice? Lingering... On those dreadful words. Anticipating... When, and if you'll pick up the phone Please, just please mi amor, don' leave me alone. Wanting... To feel your touch, kiss, caress, Your passion couldn' be anything less For you are mi angelito, A love all so genuinely true You lift me out of the blue. I feel as if this ebony sky's stars are Reachable Your love taking me so high... The evidence is all too real, My fate is sealed... And as your girl, a promise to swear Myself to you is the deal. So papi, can you feel what I feel, See what I see? Ultimately, will you dream wit' me? --------------------------- Por mi corazon, mi mundo, mi hombre... Mi angelito, eres el razon porque sigo con Mi vida...Te quiero... Amor Y Lagrimas |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
On the title...theres only a "'s" because i didn' want to put his name...thats the reason it looks a lil' funny Amor Y Lagrimas |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Oh em gee. Oh my gumbo. Oh fo shizzle my ga-zizzle. Here is, in my opinion, one of your greater works to date (in so far as I've read your work). Great poem, and great that you are being consistent.  |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
Lol, thank you very much...This one's my favorite, it was a very fulfilling thing for me, he meant alot. Still does Amor Y Lagrimas |
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