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Teen Poetry #9

im done simply finished

FarFromOrdinary
New Member

since 2011-01-19

Posts 2

0 posted 2011-01-19 08:45 PM

Im done trying
so desperatley
to reach eveyones standards
im simply finished with
pleasing ......
by dissapointing myself

Never achiving what i want
to occupied trying to maintain
everyones constant approval
never tuley perfect.

because perfect oes not exist
to many oppsing opinions

And as much as i want to be what u want

Im done loving all of you more than i love pieces of me

Im finish giving nut nevr reciving
Recongnition, appreciation , love
anything that shows that you understand that what i do, what i give, what i sacrificed, is all for you

so im done
Im simply finished

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-21 10:33 AM

Again, the beauty in this is the honesty. I as a reader truly appreciate it.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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