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Prats
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since 2010-12-16
Posts 74


0 posted 2010-12-18 08:34 AM



Deep in my heart I'm concealing things,
that I'm longing to say;
Scared to confess what I'm feeling,
frightened you'll slip away.

I always wonder what you’re thinking,
When I look at you,
But I’m afraid to say anything,
Don’t u feel this too?

When I’m with or around you,
I just lose myself,
Your heart is the only place where,
I want to dwell.

I know someday, u’ll have a beautiful life,
Every thing ideally aligned.
I know, u’ll be a sun in someone else’s sky,
Why can’t it be mine???
Be my sunshine!!!

<3

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

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XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-01 09:07 AM


Moving. So sadly sweet.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

MadMarcus
Junior Member
since 2009-11-25
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna
2 posted 2011-01-01 07:46 PM


I really liked this one!
I´m feeling the same way atm.

Prats
Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74

3 posted 2011-01-02 08:11 AM


I thank you for you comments...

When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D

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