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What I hate about you
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What I hate about you |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
I hate it when you smile at me, I hate it with despair I hate the way you speak to me, how is it that you dare? I hate it when your not around, even when I'm sick I hate the way you make me wonder, I even hate when we almost click, I hate it how your nose wrinkles, every-time you laugh I hate the way you look at me, it tears my soul in half I hate the fact you said you loved me when you grabbed my hand to keep me warm I hate the way you'r always right in the middle of a storm I hate it when you say change will come all your doing is stalling, anything but stall but mostly, I hate the way I don't hate you not even a little bit nothing, nothing at all |
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toriber Junior Member
since 2010-06-10
Posts 22texas |
i totally understand iv been through feelings like that. very good wright id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Awesome poem! I loved it!!! "When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car" |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is so real. Very creative write. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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