Teen Poetry #9 |
Stalemate |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
IM friend list Opens up I see you there And I know you see me Too This little stalemate We’ve got going Neither one wants To make the first move Sure, I guess I’m sorry But are you sorry too? Ignoring my texts Say you don’t want to talk to me Didn’t do anything that Serious to you And seeing you there Makes me want to Scream Cry Hug you ‘til I die And I don’t know What you want me to do I think what I’m trying to say is I’m tired Of not speaking with you |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
And then there were those days when u would give anything to speak to somebody, but the courage disappears and you can't make the first move.. everyone can relate to this.. great poem.. the emotions just flow off the page.. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This really busts me one in the chops. It's written so the reader easily slips into the writers seat and becomes the wounded party. So very well delivered. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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