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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513


0 posted 2010-12-04 01:17 PM


IM friend list
Opens up
I see you there
And I know you see me
Too

This little stalemate
We’ve got going
Neither one wants
To make the first move

Sure, I guess I’m sorry
But are you sorry too?
Ignoring my texts
Say you don’t want to talk to me
Didn’t do anything that
Serious to you

And seeing you there
Makes me want to
Scream
Cry
Hug you ‘til I die
And I don’t know
What you want me to do

I think what I’m trying to say is
I’m tired
Of not speaking with you

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2010-12-13 08:22 PM


And then there were those days when u would give anything to speak to somebody, but the courage disappears and you can't make the first move..

everyone can relate to this.. great poem.. the emotions just flow off the page..

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-02 05:44 AM


This really busts me one in the chops. It's written so the reader easily slips into the writers seat and becomes the wounded party. So very well delivered.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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