»
Main Forums
»
Teen Poetry #9
»
A cover up
| Teen Poetry #9 |
|
A cover up |
|
|
*tori_rose* Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44Weber City, VA |
By dawn, A smiling face By dusk, Tear soaked and scared She walks through the day, wearing a mask of happiness. Hoping no on looks close enough to see the, fear, emptiness, and sadness. All visible through her eyes, and the thoughtfull look she gets when she stares off into space. She needs someone, help from a freind, but how if she won't let anyone in? ask her? talk to her? but will she answer? will she explain? |
||
| © Copyright 2010 victoria wheale - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
nice poem...  Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!! |
||
|
XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I love the questions at the end, though I rather enjoyed the entire piece. I find that fear sucks and leaves people empty when we do not reach out or let on what it is we feel. Better to be brave and take the risk than to simply die alone, unheard, unfulfilled, burdened with our own what if's. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
