Teen Poetry #9 |
In Another Life |
Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Hearts will hold to those they find They knew in another life. You leave a deep imprint upon me Permanent as a star- Though we know that Even stars are doomed to die. And like a star I see you shine. You shine so brightly within me. And when darkness comes I'll find you, like I have So many times before. I recognise the lives we're shared. And if you sleep I'll follow you, Though your hands may be cold- I'll kiss your blue lips To take away my pain. And though we know that Stars are doomed to die We like them are Blessed to be reborn. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this! Melancholy but insightful that memories give us warmth and hope. Well done. Words are weapons, toss them with care. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
:O Thank-you very much! 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Julien.D New Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 4France |
Ah man ! Did you feel it ? This powerful melancholy. Thanks. Hope I'll be reading one of your new poems soon Keep up |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Thank-you. |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
nice poem... i also luv memories... |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Well written. Interesting subject. Reflective. Provoking. Three thumbs up (I can say that because I am a mutant). ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Thank-you. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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HolsJoscelyne Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23Colchester, United Kingdom |
Well done! It's so moving and inspiring I'd love to see more of your work! |
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