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Somewhere to be Me |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Somewhere cross the ocean, somewhere past he sea, Somewhere 'yonder boundaries a light is there for me. Beyond the sky's horizon my mind can wander free. So careless and limitless to be all I can be. Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light! |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
nice thoughts... i only wish dat d flow could have been better... still i liked it...  Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is nice, although I look for higher standards of excellence from your poetry. But it's good just to jot down simple thoughts once in a while. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
I know what you mean, Garapan. However, I must say, in my defense, this poem was written about four years ago when my poetry skills were... less than adequate... ^.^" ~UNTAMEDelegance Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light! |
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SarahJoyScott Junior Member
since 2011-01-13
Posts 16Finland |
It's beautifull! This poem also reminds me of a song named "Somewhere over the rainbow". That's the song playing in my head when I read your poem. :o) |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
hahahah! Defense, accepted, Poetess. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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