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I (Don't) Need a Hero
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I (Don't) Need a Hero |
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ForgottenWorks New Member
since 2009-01-31
Posts 6Kissimmee,FL |
I (Don't) Need a Hero It's me against the world now isn't it? I cannot tell a soul;it's my biggest secret Nobody understands me;not at all Although deep down I know, I will be my own down fall Day by day,its all that passes my mind I know I need someone to help me get rid of this cursed bind I know I need someone to set me free Someone to save me,to save me from me Love it or hate it,of that I'm unsure But all I know is that there is no cure I know it's wrong,from my heart to my core But when has that stopped anyone before? My friend had posted this under a account that she made but this is my poem. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
awesome. i liked it alot. great words. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I like this a lot. It's actually very pretty in a way. HaHa! The format could use some cleaning up. Nice word choice and phrasing. |
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