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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-09-04 01:29 AM


You were the reason;
it was your fault.
You unshackled
my beating vault.

You were the boy
I claimed as "the one."
You were the moon;
you were the sun.

You were the reason;
you were the rhyme.
You were the heart
I declared as mine.

You were my first;
you were the most.
I was the foolish;
the one who lost.

A beautiful flicker;
love at its purest.
I was the shyer;
you were the surest.

A treasure to have;
a gift to hold.
The only person
I ever told.

You were the "were;"
my every "because."
You were the "meant to be"

That never was.


Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

© Copyright 2010 Melissa Reneé Axtell - All Rights Reserved
madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
1 posted 2010-09-04 02:16 AM


This is quite a good poem and is very emotional. I hope that you will continue this standard in the future.

M

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-03 09:13 PM


Powerful. Awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Sara Mikael
Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34

3 posted 2011-01-04 08:54 AM


I loved every single word of it......
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