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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
You were the reason; it was your fault. You unshackled my beating vault. You were the boy I claimed as "the one." You were the moon; you were the sun. You were the reason; you were the rhyme. You were the heart I declared as mine. You were my first; you were the most. I was the foolish; the one who lost. A beautiful flicker; love at its purest. I was the shyer; you were the surest. A treasure to have; a gift to hold. The only person I ever told. You were the "were;" my every "because." You were the "meant to be" That never was. Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light! L: Yes, that would be dark. |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
This is quite a good poem and is very emotional. I hope that you will continue this standard in the future. M |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Powerful. Awesome. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
I loved every single word of it......  |
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