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Teen Poetry #9

This Beach I'll Miss

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2010-08-24 03:31 AM

Spread out our towels, lay on our backs.
The day is calm, we can relax.
I'm laughing at all your wise cracks.
It's not an act, it's not an act.

You rub the lotion on my skin.
I feel your touch, can't help but grin.
You're getting closer, moving in.
Something begins, something begins.

The sun bakes down, producing heat.
Your boombox plays that catchy beat.
The waves are breaking near our feet.
I feel complete, I feel complete.

Suddenly, you take my hand.
You look so cute covered in sand.
Your lips are high in my demand,
This wasn't planned, this wasn't planned.

I move in close and steal a kiss.
I never could have pictured this.
Complete perfection, total bliss.
This beach I'll miss, this beach I'll miss.

*Amber

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-02 10:12 AM

I'm not sure how you did it but you nailed this spot on the hat rack. This is soooo perfect for describing this moment, and everything you did here just really works for me. Awesome.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

2 posted 2011-01-20 01:03 AM

Thank you so much! You always have the best comments. I appreciate it.

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