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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2010-08-04 10:54 AM


The last stanza was not meant to rhyme, but it just came out like that.
And for those who know me really well...also know that I can't rhyme in a poem if my life depended on it, so this makes me very happy : )
Also...this is extremely short for me, it was hard for me to finish it like this, but nothing else was jumping from my mind, so I decided to leave it short and simple.
This was sort of based on the song Airplanes by Hayley Williams and B.o.B, but its very true for me right now.



The air is cool outside,
it feels a little refreshing.
The night sky welcomes me
as I lay down on the damp grass.

My eyes feel heavy while
I search among the stars
for one that I can wish upon.
There are none.

My wish will have to wait tonight,
it's just not meant for be.
One day I'll find my shooting star
and make my wish for reality.



julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-01 09:34 AM


Positive and upbeat while portraying longing. I truly enjoy such poetry because it's honest without crushing the world. Love your quote, too.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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