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Private Eye Problems |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
I can't believe this came to pass! I can't believe my awe-struck! This wouldn't happen to anyone else. No, just a blatant fool like I. I can't believe I hired you. What a glaring, brash mistake, you temptress in detective's clothes. He was never yours to take! The vixen in the chickens' coop; the spider in your soft-spun web. I never thought he'd fall for you when ten long years we both were wed. I called you in, Ms. Inspector, but my intentions were the best. I never dreamed my husband dear would take the bait like all the rest. Now you're just a bad memoir or cruel affairs and love-spurned lies. I'll get him back, you man-eating minx! You husband stealing Private Eye! Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This brought a (wry) smile. A good write, thanks. Seems some creeps get into the P.I. trade for the same reasons some geriatrics professionals get into that---to destroy and torture with what they believe to be impunity... If one wants to hire a private dick or two, ask them to do an obviously unethical job first, merely as a test of character. If they agree to it, then vamoose and try the next noser on the list. Good luck to the protagonist here on getting just restitution! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is crazy! I loved it! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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