Teen Poetry #9 |
If This Ship Sinks, I Give In |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hey guys, so i guess i'm back.. Sort of.. haha.. really really really rusty.. not sure if i like this so please be honest.. Ohhh Titles Is Inspired By Birds Of Tokyo..-- just a random song i'm listening to right now.. Cheers.. And Enjoy (I Hope) _______________________________________________ If This Ship Sinks, I Give In She’s trying to get her head straight But this game she’ll never win She started in the wrong place So now she’s giving in Somehow her broken heart Is still beating through the pain Like it never mattered That she slowly grew insane She didn’t see the warning signs She just sunk down low Weighted down by promises And feelings she couldn’t show She can’t stop this train She’s never getting off There’s a lesson to be learnt And She’s come too far to stop There’s too many signs to read them all To many roads to stumble down She doesn’t have time to waste She’s got to leave this town Believe her when she says There’s nothing left to say You’ve been her world for months now But she’s done with you today She sailed herself too far out On a sea of flavoured winds Got lost up in the promises Of a love that never wins There will be no rescue She will not be found Her voice a distant memory She’ll never make a sound Weightless as she’s carried Into the rising tide Her body bruised and broken She has nothing left to hide She clutches to the photo The man who broke her heart Married with three kids She should of known it from the start |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Oh Jess honey...I'm so sorry. That isn't fair to you one tiny bit. Miss you hun, give Millie a hug for me. love you, Em {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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stacylynn418 Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40new york |
I really enjoyed reading this one. Doesn't seem to me that you're rusty at all :] |
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*tori_rose* Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44Weber City, VA |
i loved reading this just from the words i can tell what you are feeling and i am very sorry for that. it deffinatly paints a picture |
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