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Teen Poetry #9

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toriber
Junior Member

since 2010-06-10

Posts 22
texas

0 posted 2010-06-10 01:33 PM

  friendship starts when you see a total stranger
   sitting alone and just for no reason go over
                    and say hello

     yall exchange numbers and talk all night
  its like yall've been friends all of your lives

   summer comes and goes and now every one knows
    yall are joined at the hip never letting go

       untill one day who she thinks is the        perfect boy has to go and get in the way

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

1 posted 2010-06-13 01:20 PM

This is one of those "been there, done that" poems for me. I went through very similar situations when I was in high school(many years ago).

This poem brought back the memories of a friendship that I had lost forever, we are still working on it.

~Tamma

P.S. Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

"Don't love me dispite my flaws, but because of them"

Zaineb
Junior Member

since 2009-05-22

Posts 27
Denmark

2 posted 2010-06-20 11:56 AM

I really like this, it is really one of the poems, where you think:" I been there." WEL DONE!!!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2010-06-21 12:22 PM

Great first post, I can definately relate to this, as im sure most everyone can. hope to read more soon.
=)

toriber
Junior Member

since 2010-06-10

Posts 22
texas

4 posted 2010-08-06 09:39 AM

thank yall very much

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

toriber
Junior Member

since 2010-06-10

Posts 22
texas

5 posted 2010-08-06 09:40 AM

thank yall very much

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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