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Danny Roberts
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since 2010-05-30
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0 posted 2010-05-30 04:34 PM



Oh cruel fate
Or darkest hour
Forsaken me have you?

I stand alone
I will not die
This dagger I shall hold

Sorrows edge
Does stab at me
This grief does leave me blind

The memories of yester year
Still tearing at this mind
I cry and scream
But peace
Nay peace
It's never to be near

The sights and sounds
Loves pale face
It's bliss
It's joy
It's smile
They tear at me from yester year
As I walk this lonely mile

Bones break and veins do bleed
My heart it weeps dark tears
cheeks stained with shadows
The sum of all my fears

Alone I suffer
Inside this mind
Traped in the abyss
As sins and scars from days past
Do cut, do strike, do rend
Alone i'm left in this abyss
Alone i'm left to bleed
And so the future dims for me
Bears not hope or light or rest
The future ever bright
Shattered by this past
And so these golden days
Do turn to dreams of ash

I miss you so
I feel the pain
I will not die today
But in my heart I know the truth
Actions forced by fate
Giving ups on you my dear
Tiss a cruel twist of fate.

For in this broken heart of glass
And whithin this shattered mind
Thoughts of you reside
And in my soul I know
That I love you for all you are
For every fault and crack
That for however many days go by
Or memories do fade
That my love for you
Will never dim
Twill never go away
And so i die but not this day
But forever more
For every day is hell it seems
And I can't take much more.

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2010-05-30 08:08 PM


All your stuff is so sad, and tormented. Sick as it is, I enjoy the torment. I especially liked the last stanza. Thanks for sharing.

-Kate

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

Danny Roberts
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since 2010-05-30
Posts 8

2 posted 2010-05-31 01:05 AM


...
Thanks...

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2010-05-31 04:06 PM


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhah

You two are awesome.

Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
4 posted 2010-05-31 04:08 PM


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahaha

You two are awesome.

I am however don't have the benifit of sadism, and so was left throughly depressed. Twice.

Awesome poem though...

Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

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