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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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You'd think that words never die, that at least I'd have some thoughts, but standing in this field alone, my trust begins to rot. A field full of empty thoughts, pages blank and torn, will the words never come? Am I left alone? I've waited for your company, tried so hard to rest, pondered on the things I feel, but am I at my best? I used to say so many things, words helped me through. But now I feel so out of it.. my sky is never blue. Living in this field, empty and alone, will the words never come, will I ever feel at home.. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Yay! It's been a while since I've read one of your poems that rhymed. It was pretty good.  And I know the feeling. I've been kind of museless lately when it comes to writing. >_< |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
I feel this. I'm about to go through it. It played upon my bleeding heart strings. I don't know whether to thank you or curse you  lol. Good write!-Kate Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :) |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
hahaha. thank you both for your comments. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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mozart4321 Junior Member
since 2010-06-29
Posts 29 |
very good!! im sure many of us have been there before. |
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