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Teen Poetry #9

Jargon 2.0

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2010-05-24 11:09 PM

When times get hard I say a prayer
That one day I'll wish for air
And see it vanish from my lung
While I keep quiet. Hold my tongue.

For life isn't what they say
As you go along your day
To find yourself broken in the dust
While passers by let you rust

I might be bitter and so strain
Sometimes i ignore the pain
But when i feel insecure
I wish again for something pure

For in my past I have sin
Fell down times.loss not win.
But tell me when your in that dust
How can you never rust?

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

1 posted 2010-06-01 03:39 AM

Something about oil and polishing to avoid rust.

Beautifully captured.

“Most men lead lives of quiet desperation and go to the grave with the song still in them.” -Henry David Thoreau

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