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Vulpine
Junior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota

0 posted 2010-05-23 09:07 PM


As i stare into what i dont know
I ask myself Could this be my soul

I watch my life play infront of me
I start to wounder if this is realy me

I see me cry
For reasons i cant deny,

I feel my heart about to burst
I feel as if my life is cursed

Until I see myself laughing
I understand that every thing happening

Is how its supposed to be
It's me

I have a soul no one else could know
it sometime's can have its toll

But i'm happy to know
It's my soul

I can do many things with my soul
Like love, Laugh, and who else knows


© Copyright 2010 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
toriber
Junior Member
since 2010-06-10
Posts 22
texas
1 posted 2010-06-17 12:12 PM


this is a very good write but a bit confusing. but still it is good

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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