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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Was inspired by Emilie Autumn's song, What If. Some lines won't make sense to some. But over all this is basically me. Enjoy? ---------------------------------- Take a glance and make believe That I'm everything you perceive Yet I'm different and insecure What if I'm the disease to your cure? What if I was the unexpected? Something lying undetected Under your scope. Icy cold Struggling under what I'm told You have me figured out So sure what I'm about What if I'm everything your not? The truths afraid to be sought What if I'm the unexplained? What if I'm unholy and profaned? Would you care to share your love To know that your much higher up above? Would take a seat and chat About what I think about this and that Please don't think I'm bland Would you take the time to understand? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What if I'm the disease to your cure? Good thoughts in this poem, and it is funny how we can be so "down in the dumps" then someone comes along and brings us back to reality. That is what love (all kinds) is. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
"What if I'm the unexplained? What if I'm unholy and profaned? Would you care to share your love To know that your much higher up above?" a feeling im so familiar with!! great write as always Zach  -Lee |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
You're right Mys. Thanks Leanne for always reading my poems. And having delightful comments for them. -Zach |
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